First Draft!

After putting so much hard work and thought into the video we finally published our first draft and we are very happy with the result!
Although it isn't finished yet we are going to gain some audience feedback from different people and see what they think to it and if they would suggest improvements. We feel like asking a range of people could help us to think of new ideas and the fact that some of the people we are deciding to ask are part of our target audience could help massively as they are who we want to impress essentially!!! So by getting their opinion we can infer how the audience may choose to use the video in relation to Bulmer and Katz reception theory and we can adapt it to the needs of the audience a bit more if needs be!